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Wednesday, December 3, 2008
Assignment 9 on 03DEC: My trip to temple
Why do we go to the temple? I went to worship at a temple Baek Dam 2 weeks ago. There was very calm and peaceful place. Around here, there are Shog Cho port and mountain seol ag. So I could have a good time. Although a short time, we can forget our life time’s agony and get a peace of mind at there.
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Hi~ Mr.kim! It sounds like You spent a good time. I am a Catholics but I like a temple. Especially I like a temple Nae-so in Bu-an. How about your condition, these day?
Wow! I envy you. I've never been to temple Baek Dam. I'd like to go there.
It's nice to escape from our problems every once and a while. Temples are great places to go because they're so quiet and peaceful. I enjoy looking around the shops.
Here are some tips.
1. Never start a paragraph with a question. "There are many reasons why people go to temples."
2. "I went to BaekDam temple two weeks ago."
3. "There" means a place but a temple is "it".
4. "Shog Cho port and Seolag mountain are close by."
5. "So, I could have a good time." This sentence doesn't support anything. You don't mention that you had a good time or why you could have had a good time. I would suggest omitting this sentence.
6. "Although were weren't there very long, we could forget about our problems for a while and enjoy the peaceful environment."
I feel great interest in temples
Firtst of all, most of temples have beautiful scenery.Whenerver I visit there, I get peace of mind.
wow~ 속초 port and Mt.설악...
I 'd like to go there~~
really beautiful places..
agony...you did some difficult thing, didnt you??hahahaha
have a good day~
Hi~~ Mr.Kim. The failure of my Hainan tour was choice very cheap product of travel agency. Also, I was not going to Hainan in summer.
I knew once again as "Buy cheap and waste your money". ^_^
Thank yor for good travel information. See you next class...
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